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e #4 Eboni and Sophie -- looking at how kids are similar all over

We know something is wrong in Sudan //(pic of Sudan)//, America //(pic of America)//, all over the world //(pic of World)//.

Something always needs to be fixed. But for those who have no control, like the children, need a way to overcome the wrong that they see.

SO what do they do to make their conditions more suitable for them?

Is there something that they do to have fun? //(pic of children)//

What do they do that compares to us? Sure, we have the money to fund our activities, but they have the imagination and creativity to make something so wonderful that it would be considered something invention. Something to us, would seem like just another activity that we might get to one day. //(fade out. fade into first comparison)//


 * 1) 1 act. one


 * 1) 2 act. two


 * 1) 3 act. three


 * 1) 4 act. four


 * 1) 5 act. five


 * 1) 6 (optional)

//(fade in-between each activity.) (Pics and actual video of students saying favorite activity/sports)//

Just because they live in a bad place… Doesn’t meant that they can’t have fun We all do something to ease the tension/pain that we have

No matter where you are (pic of world)

You still have to be a child and have fun

But… along w/ the good comes the bad //(leads into Alix, Chiraayu, Briana, Eyad and Allison's video)//

(need to expand and add more pictures)

__**Chiraayu:**__ Your general idea is great even though you don’t have a full script. From what you have I think your purpose in making the video is showing how children in Sudan have fun and what games they play. You could also focus on how games are different from one part of Sudan and another. Its really up to what you want to say. If you are trying to say that all children play games even if they are in refugee camps, I think that is great. Just keep elaborating and you will have a great video.

Briana I agree; a little expansion would be good. There's so many ways that you could take this video. You could compare what we have, like Facebook and computers and iPods to what kids in different parts of the world have. I mean, you don't have to focus entirely on Sudan. You could do a world-wide comparison. But your script looks good.